We are learning to write a descriptive writing
Bang the race starts. I whooped off the diving board my
friends shouting at me! All I here is Go! Go! Go! We can win this! I’m so under pressure.I can just smell that bubbly, salty, gooey chlorine. Just listening to the carbonated water I can’t do it I just can’t. Yes you can someone says to me in my head. My mind is exploding with thoughts. I won! I won!
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