Dixon Park
The wind crashing into my face as I swing into the air. My heart is pounding as fast as it has ever been, as I go higher every time into the roasting sunny sky. My legs flying everywhere. My arms slowly losing gripIt is genuinely amusing.
Kia Ora Priya!
ReplyDeleteIt Eden here from Lake Brunner School.
I really enjoyed reading your descriptive writing about Dixon Park.
Why were you writing about Dixon park?
Maybe next time you could make your story longer, there was one word spelt wrong in your writing that was Amazing at the end but other thank that i really enjoyed it Great Job Priya!