Once again we have started baking and this year I'm baking with Jack. You can go and check out his blogs as well. He will also be posting every week. This week we made mini pizzas with Oscar,Teagan,Rhys and Kaylee. Everyone got to choose what they had on their pizza. We had three topping choices and three meat choices as well as three sauce choices. The pizzas were going great and everyone liked them until we couldn't find out why we had three extra pizza bases. When we were making the dough unfortunately when we were making the dough I think we added too much oil so the dough was a little too hard but after awhile of kneading the dough it became soft enough to roll out. In the end the pizzas were quite good. We asked some kids to give us feedback.
Rylee said that she liked the size of the pizzas. She also said that the pizzas were nicely cooked.
Hayley said that she really liked the pizza and it was a nice size and she liked that we were careful not to put lots of cheese on her a pizza because she is dairy free.
Nice work Priya. Exciting that you are baking again and training up a new partner. I like the way you have sort feed back. Great start to the baking year!
ReplyDeleteHi Priyansha! My name is Mia from Yaldhurst Model School. I really liked the way that you added in some photos, it really added some interest to your blog post.
ReplyDeleteIt sounds yummy! I don't do too much cooking or baking myself, but I certainly like eating stuff, I don't really know anyone that doesn't! I don't think you do ethier, do you?
To improve, maybe you could put some spaces in between your sentences in the big paragraph at the start of the blog. It was a bit hard to read and I think it will look more appealing if it was more spaced out.
Great work!
Mia
Kia ora Priyansha,
ReplyDeleteIts me Bridget from Yaldhurst Model School. I love how you shared some photos. Maybe You could try to add a slide show or something more interesting. Instead of a hole lot of writing. Before you post maybe you could re read the blog. To check if it all makes sense. Have you ever made pretzels before like the big ones that you can get? You should try they r the BEST!
Bridget
Kia Ora, Priyansha!
ReplyDeleteI am Dion, a yr 8 at Yaldhurst Model School.
The pezzas look delicious. If I was there, I would have been drooling before I even started!
My Uncle makes some great homemade pizzas.
Have you cooked/baked anything before?
I would suggest spacing the first paragraph out into two paragraphs.
It would be easier for people to read.
Kind regards,
Dion
Hey Priyasha, I am Lucy from Rimu Class from Yaldhurst Model School.
ReplyDeleteI really love this blog post, I like how you identified what you did wrong and right. I wish I got a slice of the pizza :(
Did you enjoying making the pizza?
I was so excited when I saw your cooking blog post because I LOVE cooking.
Maybe you could seperate your writing into 2 or 3 paragraphs.
Kind Regards
From Lucy :)
Kia Ora I'm Jorja from Yaldhurst Model School.
ReplyDeleteI liked the you you had presented it.
The facts you have used are really good.
Next time, you could center it to make it more eye catching!
What did you use to make then?
Kind Regards Jorja.
Kia Ora Priyansha!
ReplyDeleteMy name is Hana and I'm a year 6 from Yaldhurst Model School!
Wow Priyansha! I love the photos you added! That way, blog commenters like me will be drawn to your blog post!
You know, those pizzas look really good! I actually help my mother cook in the kitchen! We do baking too! It's really fun to bake and cook as a family!
To improve your blog post even more, you could try adding even more photo to make your blog even more interesting, and visually appealing! And, like Mia said, to make it even better, you could add some spaces!
Keep up the amazing work Priyansha!
From Hana! (●⌒∇⌒●)
Hi Priyansha ,
ReplyDeleteIt is Olivia form Yaldhurst Model School. First of all ,How are You ? . Well I am good and ready for you to look at my comment.
Those pizzas looked really good and Yum. When I look at pizza It just makes me really hungry.
Great Pizza baking looks great.
Happy blogging.